Sunday, October 7, 2007

Feedback on Term 3 Speech - Why Fairytales are Scary

2.37 Fabulous introduction which caught our attention and made us interested in your topic. You gave some excellent examples of why fairytales are scary, using interesting vocabulary. You spoke clearly and with great volume, but perhaps too fast.

Next Steps:
Pause a little so that each point can 'sink in' with the audience. If you slow down it gives people a chance to think about the ideas after you've shared them.

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