This is my retell It is about bad jelly the witch. but I have changed it so its her side of the story.

Good Jelly the kind generous Witch

It was the year 1000 and Bad Jelly wasn’t to be found. God was the strongest, and king of this world and only him, one boy, one girl and one cow knew about BAD JELLY THE WITCH.

Hey, so I may not be on earth, but I’m still alive. I’m Good Jelly, the kind, generous witch, but you guys probably think I’m bad and I stole Lucy the cow, and I’m Bad Jelly the Witch but you’re all wrong!

First of all, there are these two annoying brats, Rose and Tim, and they live with their stupid little dog that can apparently play the piano with its tail and you all think its amazing. Ok well, I can do something better with my thumb. I can flick it and straight away I could be making a bee play the piano with it’s antennas. Guess what? That cheeky little brat stung my finger and flew off. I then tried to kill it but I turned it into a tree. I then thought I wasn’t have supposed to have done that. I was supposed to have turned it into a policeman. Oh well, a tree is just as good. Then my finger started to hurt. It started going all purple and fat, uhh yuck. I think I need to go to the doctors.

Rose and Tim lived in a cottage with a cow called Lucy. Their family were really poor.

It was two in the morning when I heard this cow mooing. I was awake already because of my thumb, it was aching in pain. I thought to myself there is no point staying in my bed, in a house that’s a orphan home for unwanted monsters, when I can look after that poor creature crying. That cow could come in and stay at my house too.

So I jumped out of bed and rushed down to check on the cow. I could tell by the shimmer in her eyes she wanted food. So I took her to my home and gave her every thing her little heart desired. It was morning now, around 7, and Rose and Tim set off to get some milk from their cow. Of course she wasn’t there, she was with me. So Rose and Tim went off to find Lucy the cow.

They met a couple of people on the way. They met Binkle Bonk and then there was the earth worm, Mudwiggle. Later there was a Mouse, but I knew one of them the Rusty Tin Lion. He said they were looking for Lucy. I then set off to tell them that Lucy was with me. I was walking in the forest and I saw a rather large tree so I climbed it and didn’t see any of the kids. Then my sack fell down from the tree I went down to get it but then my thumb started throbbing in pain again. The doctor said I should have some medicine when it’s mid day, and I was feeling kind of tired, so I picked my sack up. It felt rather heavy and then I started to hear noises, like ‘let me out’. I thought it was my thumb talking, saying ‘this is killing me’. So I just went home faster to take a pill. It took a while for me to get home and it was around 6pm. If I had my pills and went back it would be twelve by the time I got home. I asked one of my monsters if he could look after my sack and put it back. My eight eyed monster went and put it in the highest tower where all my ingredients were. I then made a joke, I said, “Let’s make some children stew in the morning”, like I was saying there is not much yummy stuff up there.

Now Rose and Tim must have become rather frightened when I said that. The next day I was coming up the tower and the kids somehow got an eagle to take them away. When I got up there I saw them and I said, “Stop right there.” They didn’t stop so I said, “I have got your cow.”
They said, “You evil witch.”
I got pretty offended so I jumped on my broomstick and called them names and said, “I will never give back the cow, you are so mean to it!”

God and I were really good friends. God started hearing about all the things I said and then he got grumpy. I went and made it worse by saying something even nastier. God was furious at me and he kicked me down to a coffin and I’m still alive! Rose and Tim probably got Lucy back. I wonder what happened to my monster home, I really want to get out of here! But I’m writing this story instead.
The End
Christie Morrison (aka GoodJelly the Witch)