Christies persuasive Writing

This is my rubric for my persuasive writing piece Here it is
Dear Government,

Imagine an under water world. People communicating just like the fish do under water. People using all kinds of technology under water. People being adopted by sea animals! And that’s just some of the amazing things that I will need to tell you to start planning for the year 3000! Hello my name is Christie. I’m writing this letter to try and influence you to start planning for the future. If you don’t have the technology you could be really stuck. That’s why I’m trying to persuade you to start planning for this possibility. We will not have any place to start building on earth, so we will have to build under water!

We will have to start by building an amazing shop that can turn people into sea people, which will make them able to breathe under water. This would be so cool. If it happens they would be able to communicate with animals! But after they have been transformed they would need an expert to teach them what it is like to be in an under water world. I think this would be a great experience!

The technology will be amazing because it is the year 3000 so TVs will be able to go under water and so will cameras, cell phones and other sorts of technology. This will be so cool because when they are under water they can communicate with people on land. We need to start developing this technology today.

The sea animals that want to adopt you will have to come into an adoption shop. There will be fish that decide which person suits what type of fish, and then they can adopt what person they want. If the humans that want to adopt have a family the parents can do a course.

So just imagine this amazing experience. You would get to have so many memories. You could be a different species for a half of your life, so that is why I’m trying to persuade you to start planning for the year 3000!

Yours truly,

Christie